The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #185

theinkwell (72)in The Ink Well • 3 months ago

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Stories from the Previous Week

Thank you to who posted a story for last week's prompt: "Never say never":

Author Shout-outs

We'd like to call out a few stories that got high marks from our curators this week.

@janaveda

The Cultivation of Sovereignty

Curator comment:

@janaveda writes the sort of story that will stay with the reader. It has a novel plot, embedded in a familiar theme. A young man, a gardener of humble birth, is smitten by the daughter of his rich landowner boss. The young man is a brilliant landscape artist. He has planted a field with flowers in a shape that resembles the face of the young girl. The design can be seen from airplanes. People have wondered at it, and snapped photos of it from their vantage in the sky. The story opens with the young woman disdaining the attention of the gardener. Then journalists come to the house. Everyone is marveling at the amazing design.
Finally, the young girl seeks out her suitor and lets him know she welcomes his advances. Aside from a few minor translation issues, the narrative soars.

@jazclassic

Better Days Ahead

Curator comment:

This story from @jazclassic is sweet and sentimental, I enjoyed the read, and I could tell she enjoyed the write! And she put a lot of time and effort into the piece. I could picture Felicia, Chaska, and Samuel interacting around the dinner table, and it painted a lovely picture of family life, as well as the relationships that grew against the odds.

@popurri

Against the Invaders

Curator comment:

@popurri's manages to bring a fiction for the prompt "Never say never" in which she confirms the importance of optimism and confidence for achieving goals. The story is simple, universal, but full of symbolism that allows it to be read in a very close and personal way. A family experiences the consequences of a despotic government that controls all social life, including the consumption of food and obedience to work at unwanted jobs.

Beneath this situation, a germ of rebellion emerges that manages to organize and overthrow the dictatorship. In the end there are some invaders who will be expelled by an army organized for this purpose, which arrives to the joy of the inhabitants who shout the word freedom.

Fiction Writing Prompt of the Week

This week's prompt is: "Things are not always what they seem."

"Things are not always what they seem" is a quote by Phaedrus that continues, "the first appearance deceives many; the intelligence of a few perceives what has been carefully hidden in the recesses of the mind."

This can be manifested in several ways. For example, eyewitness testimony in criminal cases sometimes show how a person's perception can wrong — they may believe they saw things they did not see. Like magic tricks performed by magicians, sometimes reality can fool us.

Also, people may see optical illusions, or see images in clouds, reflections, or dim lighting. A small puddle in a parking lot might look like a frozen lake from a distance. A stranger walking along on the other side of the street might look like a long lost relative or friend.

Tell us a story about a character who sees something, and they are not sure if it is an illusion... or a character who sees a crime committed (avoid violence per Ink Well rules, of course!), and must be sure of what they saw in order to help convict the perpetrator... or whatever your imagination conjures up!

Good luck. Remember, as always, we are looking for the elements of story. These include:

Great first lines
Good settings
Well-developed characters
Integration of action, dialogue and narrative
A conflict that intrigues the reader
A "story arc" which results in the resolution of the conflict and brings the story to a satisfying conclusion
And of course, we are looking for well-edited stories that are not littered with typos or grammatical errors — please use the free Grammarly tool for grammar and spelling checks (and not AI writing or rephrasing tools for revising)

You can find more on all of these topics in the catalog of storytelling tips.

If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators:

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Past Prompts

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3 months ago in The Ink Well by theinkwell (72)

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popurri (71) 3 months ago

Thank you @theinkwell 🌼 and congratulations to @janaveda and @jazclassic

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janaveda (72) 3 months ago

Thanks to you too, and @jazclassic.

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ridgette (67) 3 months ago

Congratulations to the featured stories and as well to the ones who participated in the last week's prompt! This week's prompt is kinda intriguing, but I'll see if I could make a story out of it... Anyway, goodluck to us all, and may we all have a productive week ahead!

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nancybriti1 (70) 3 months ago

Congratulations to all the winners of the week. See you and keep the successes coming

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marriot5464 (67) 3 months ago

My entry
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@marriot5464/the-shady-neighbour?referral=marriot5464

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blaqbarbie (57) 3 months ago

This is my entry
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@blaqbarbie/the-unseen-ballerina