The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #192

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Stories from the Previous Week

Thank you to who posted a story for last week's prompt: "I think I'm being followed":

Author Shout-outs

We'd like to call out a few stories that got high marks from our curators this week.

@lightpen

My Job and My Relationship

Curator comment:

@lightpen really has some talent. In this story he tells the tale from a woman's perspective, about a serious trust breach and the expectations of the boyfriend that she let him see her phone. She is not cheating on him, but she has a very good reason not to allow him to see it, as she works for the secret police and it is an official phone. He doesn't trust her and tries to bully her into letting him see it to make sure she's not texting with other boyfriends.

But the remarkable thing is the spat between the MC and her best friend, who keeps trying to provide reasoning why the boyfriend might be acting that way, and the MC ends up frustrated and angry that the friend isn't supporting her. It's very realistic, both as a "human condition" situation where people don't see eye to eye, but also as an example of something that you can easily imagine happening between two very good friends.

They make up the next day. And she resolves to go explain the situation to the boyfriend and why in her role, with her official phone, she can't let him have it. Instead, he doesn't let her finish a sentence. He demands that she choose between loyalty to him and to her job. She chooses the job.

@nancybriti1

The Pursuer

Curator comment:

@nancybriti1 writes a powerful, poignant and mysterious story about a man who falls down stairs and is whisked away to the hospital where he nearly dies but is resuscitated. This is all narrated by someone who is there by his side, but ultimately we come to realize that the patient cannot see her. She is a presence, but unseen. His daughter comes to see him, and he proclaims, "I think I'm being followed." She shushes him, but then he says "it's here." The daughter tells him again that he must remain quiet according to the hospital staff directives, and that she already lost her mother and does not want to lose him too. The narrator decides to leave, but intends to come back when he is ready for her to show her face, and we realize that she is the wife and mother who has passed on.

@blaqbarbie

The Watchful Eyes

Curator comment:

@blaqbarbie's achievement in her story is to make the prompt secondary to her plot. The story focuses on the protagonist, on Lara. She is musing about her life. She is fussing (possibly unfairly) about her assistant. Lara is self-centered and self-absorbed. We get pulled into her ruminations. The sense of being followed is in the background. We almost don't notice it. She almost doesn't notice it. But she does. At the story's climax she does go into the street. She is terrified by a van that pulls up. However, the van doesn't have a stalker inside. It has her assistant. Lara is relieved. We are relieved. Then we are shown the figure of a man lurking under a street light, truly a stalker, and we remember how this story actually began. Lara was reading an article that told of a serial killer. We realize in that moment that Lara has had a close call, a glancing encounter with death. The story comes full circle. The article, the stalker, and Lara safely driving away with her under-appreciated assistant. This is a very well-constructed, well-told story.

Fiction Writing Prompt of the Week

This week's prompt is: "Hidden camera"

Welcome to the prompt of the week. Video and surveillance cameras are everywhere these days.

They capture the license plates of speeding drivers.
They give security personnel a view into the activities within the building they are guarding.
They record the activities in a place of business so they can be reviewed later if there has been an incident.
Security cameras give residents in a home a view of who is knocking on their door, and if someone is trying to break in, or has taken a delivered package from the doorstep.
Cameras also can provide a record of the activities of a nanny or maid.

Hopefully these examples are giving you all kinds of ideas for stories! What if your character discovers something they didn't know about their hired help? What if a security officer recognizes a person who is robbing the facility they are guarding? What if your character looks at the security camera for their home when the doorbell rings and sees that the person standing there is a person they used to date before they got married, and secretly still love?

We look forward to seeing the story you come up with for "hidden camera."

Good luck. Remember, as always, we are looking for the elements of story. These include:

Great first lines
Good settings
Well-developed characters
Integration of action, dialogue and narrative
A conflict that intrigues the reader
A "story arc" which results in the resolution of the conflict and brings the story to a satisfying conclusion
And of course, we are looking for well-edited stories that are not littered with typos or grammatical errors — please use the free Grammarly tool for grammar and spelling checks (and not AI writing or rephrasing tools for revising)

You can find more on all of these topics in the catalog of storytelling tips.

If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators:

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Past Prompts

Here are the past prompts if you would like to use them or refer back to them:
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lightpen (68) 2 months ago

Thank you, @theinkwell. I am highly motivated.

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bipolar95 (67) 2 months ago

Congratulations guys 🎊👏🏿

nancybriti1 (70) 2 months ago

Thank you, thank you very much, friends! Happy for your mention and congratulations to the other nominees. May the successes continue

coolbabe88 (60) 2 months ago

Congratulations guys

terrybobs (41) 2 months ago

https://inleo.io/@terrybobs/seven-wonders-of-the-hidden-camera-bjp?referral=terrybobs
MY POST

adese (62) 2 months ago

This is my entry

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@adese/the-nannys-secret-plan

I supported @potpourri and @kei2

estilodereba (62) 2 months ago

This is my entry: https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@estilodereba/the-ingenious-woman-eng-esp?referral=estilodereba

omokunmi (56) 2 months ago

I supported @adese and @abojode

Here is my link

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@omokunmi/zara-and-the-hidden-camera

abojode (60) 2 months ago

This is my link

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@abojode/he-lost-the-contract

I supported @terrybobs and @adese

ubdan313 (61) 2 months ago

Hey guys here's my prompt
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@ubdan313/scandal

sabiukpa (55) 2 months ago

Good to be back, here is my entry: https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@sabiukpa/the-eyes

blaqbarbie (57) 2 months ago

Congrats to all of us mentioned 🎉

I supported @terrybobs and @adese .
My entry
https://inleo.io/@coolbabe88/the-eyes-on-the-wall-j3t?referral=coolbabe88

marriot5464 (67) 2 months ago

My entry
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@marriot5464/young-landlord

gabmr (66) 2 months ago

Hello! Long time without posting here. This is my weekly story:

https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@gabmr/homesick

Here is my entry
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@blaqbarbie/behind-closed-doors

osomar357 (69) 2 months ago

Greetings community, this is my participation: https://v3.ecency.com/hive-170798/@osomar357/fiction-between-cookies-and-elves

These are the people I supported: @ubdan313, @coolbabe88, @blaqbarbie

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