The narrative was intriguing as i was engrossed from the first paragraph to the end. The powerful use of a dialogue is spot on. Glad your character was able to locate her parent with your assistance.
The narrative was intriguing as i was engrossed from the first paragraph to the end. The powerful use of a dialogue is spot on. Glad your character was able to locate her parent with your assistance.
Yes, that was a relief for Joan with the help of Jake and his parents
Thank you for sharing your thoughts