Hey, I just read your story and I thought it was really engaging! You did a great job building up the tension and revealing the mystery behind the destruction of Jumeria’s garden. It was easy to feel Jumeria's sadness and frustration, and the payoff with the culprit being revealed added a nice twist.
The emotions between Jumeria and her father were touching, and I liked how you showed his support and care for her throughout the story. The ending with the apology and forgiveness also gave a sense of closure and growth.
One thing I think could make the story even better is adding a bit more detail to Kim's motivations or feelings. It could help us understand her actions on a deeper level. But overall, it was a great read. Keep up the awesome work!