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RE: The Watcher

Wow, this story was so intense! You did an incredible job building suspense, especially with the way Stacy's curiosity led her deeper into a dark discovery. The transition from everyday moments to something terrifying was so well done, it really kept me on edge. I could almost feel Stacy's unease as she watched the footage and realized what she was dealing with.

The pacing was perfect, moving from Stacy's initial sense of discomfort to the shocking realization about the footage. It was satisfying to see her take action and ultimately help solve the case—definitely a powerful conclusion to such a chilling story.

Great storytelling! I was completely hooked.