Two quite opposite endings, but I think I liked the ending one better because of the action it shows. Very good writings and description of the landscape.
Two quite opposite endings, but I think I liked the ending one better because of the action it shows. Very good writings and description of the landscape.
I'm glad to hear you found the detailing of the forest landscape immersive. Setting a strong scene is important, so I'm happy to know that came across in the writing. It's very helpful as the writer to understand what narrative elements connect with different readers. While some may prefer the more uplifting tone of ending two, I can see how the excitement and adrenaline of ending one would appeal to others.