Few minutes after madame Krishna left, I cleaned up the house and hurried to the market.
Hours later I returned to cook the meal, scooping them into sacred plates which were used in serving priests.
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Hey, @unyime1. I thoroughly enjoyed your stories, I would like to share 2 notes before I get into them.
A) May I suggest using tools like (") or (-) just to make it clearer when it's a character speaking rather than the narrator.
B) Maybe put the story together in one post, even at the risk it would be longer. I believe it would make it easier to appreciate it. You're more likely to get rewards from a short story than a serialized one.
Now regarding the story. I find each action sequence and its connectivity to the next done very well. You have done an extraordinary job at giving each character life in spite of having many, I could still tell how each character is like. The characters weren't used to just keep the plot going.
Nice work, keep up the good work.
Dear do you really like reading or it happened to you. Successes in Hive. Hugs from Venezuela, I live in Cumaná facing the Caribbean Sea.
God bless you. It is very nice to communicate with you. It is a beautiful thing to read and write about literature. I am a retired teacher, dedicated to cinema and now Yoga and cooking. Hugs from Venezuela.