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RE: The Red Toy Car

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Cancer is a difficult ailment both for the sick and their friends and family members. Every little light they can find is a beautiful thing. The character did well.

I wonder what the car signified for Mark? Was it a way to remind himself of simpler times? Why red? I feel a good story should leave me with unanswered questions.

I noticed, an issue with tenses, especially in the first paragraph. I guess you were rushed. I sometimes read my writing later, only to groan at the errors I have made. I don't often read my writing once published. 😂

Stay safe and keep your ink wet.. ✌️

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I think every one in our childhood fantsize a toy with a particular color. It was Mark's inspiration to achieve or become something later in his life. Thanks for reading and a wonderful reply.