Lovely story, and nicely written. You developed the character and his emotions well, from his social withdrawal to his falling in love.
Then one faithful dayJust this bit I believe is wrong. You probably meant "One fateful day" instead. 🙂
Well done! And thank you for sharing it.
Oh yeah, I tend to make that mistake a lot. Thanks for spotting that, I'll rectify it.
Thanks for reading and dropping a comment as well.
!PIZZA