I loved it @fantom22! Very suspenseful events and plot. Well done!
Henry was lucky it ended up like that for him and not "sleeping with the fishes" haha.
Hopefully the police would do the right thing and get to that corrupt mayor.
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Thanks, you have a great idea always. If the end of the story is happy, then the readers' well wishes remain towards the author, otherwise, they show their displeasure. The hero of the story must have got a lesson from the troubles caused by all this, being homeless from home is also a punishment.
Lol, yup. Can never please everyone, and most people prefer happy endings anyways.
I think you ended it in a very clever and nice way. Each of the characters got what they deserve in my opinion, was a good end for Henry as you described, and even the police would benefit from the money that way! 😉