Not bad :D
Have you tried a render with Cycles? I know it takes longer but it seems to do lighting better. I tend to use Eevee for timing renders as it's stupidly fast but I've found it too much effort to get spectacular lighting out of (I know it can be done as I've seen it done, but I'm nothing if not lazy).
I tried cycle but you know it takes a lot of time
In my next post, I will put a link to the full blend file so you will help me and Render it in cycle.
I will see what I can do if I catch it (sometimes I'm busy so I miss a lot of posts). Sometimes good renders just take a lot of time and there's not much that can be done about that :)