LOL! - "There's about ten grand in the kitchen taped under the sink." On TV, that's the first place anyone looks for stashed cash, it seems. This is rich:
You'll never find my money shit for brains. Unless you know what a private key is? Ever heard of Bitcoin..?
Raj, you lied to me - said this one isn't as grisly - yet he ground his heel into his knuckles, shuddering at the seaweed crackle of breaking bones. Eeep!!!
But then you surprise us after the fighting and bone-breaking with lines like this: This was the illusion of life, a reflection half glimpsed of something deeper. Something just beyond the edge of perception. Pointless to let anything worry you when you realize this underlying fallacy of the ghost in the machine.
I love the ending!!!
Hi @carolkean
I wanted to let you know that I have just made a creative writing community called 'The Ink Well' which is supported by curie.
The community introduction post is live now and I'm really happy with it, all I need to do now is share it around a bit :-)
I'd love for you to join.
https://steempeak.com/hive-170798/@raj808/introducing-the-ink-well-a-curie-curated-creative-writing-community
Thanks for the invite! I'd love to join!