Recently I wrote a poem, it just came out of my mind and heart. I hope you giys like it.
Title: Forgetting
What do we've lost?
Separated hearts
In a Bitter world
With Bitter thoughts
What do we missed?
Our childhood soul
Buried under faults
With negative defaults
Standing too high
On bubbles of pride
Can't see the mirror
Until they'll die
Davood Faramarzi aka @davidfar
Sentimientos van y vienen.
Que para calmar nuestro corazón y liberar mente.
Que nos convierte en pregunta y dudas saludos y feliz semana 😊
Gracias
Really nice poetry ☺️.
You are doing good
Thanks my friend 💯🤝🙂
Great poetry my friend 🖤
Thank you so much brother 🖤 🙌
Nice poem!
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Thank you :) Got it, I will cross post it there. Thanks for guide.