I think after 2 years of writing I could improve this significantly. I have to admit I get some of my inspiration from what you do, though mine is probably more sardonically written.
The original ten-part series did have some comedy aspects but I know a lot of my current active followers never saw it.
Let's see what the rest say, that's if anyone pipes up!
Cheers mate, that's a lovely compliment!!
If they say anything, feck em. I doubt anyone will but you know what this place can be like :0)
I am quite looking forward to seeing it. I did laugh at quik save. I worked for NCP for many years so I feel your past pain.
Kwiksave, a true fucking nightmare, maybe the title could be changed to reflect my 'new version!'
I think so!!
'The Horrors of Kwiksave', part one coming soon!
HAhahahhaha, nice title for it!