Maybe I was too ordinary with my comment. Sorry
Please friend, try not to republish this type of post in the hive.
I'm sure you have the talent to make good compositions.
You should visit the posts that have been well qualified in the hive so you can get inspired by them. Don't imitate them, just inspire yourself.
When i started some of the opinions i got states that i should add links to them. If you check previous editions, its not like that.
Thanks, i'll work on it