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RE: Home,My peace.

in HiveGhana2 days ago

I also believe home is more of a feeling than a building.


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Thank youYes ma @phyna

Alright. It's a little grammatical error that you make repeatedly.

After every comma, full stop, (or any grammar symbol), it is important you give a space.

For e.g

In conclusion,home is not just about family,home to others might be living with friends,no matter the individual involved,if it's gives peace to your soul and happiness,then that's just what matters.Thanks for stopping by my page.

Here is the correction…

In conclusion, home is not just about family, home to others might be living with friends, no matter the individual involved, if it gives peace to your soul and happiness, then that's just what matters. Thanks for stopping by my page.

You see, it might be little but it's very important to us writers.
It would make it easier for more people to read and therefore get upvotes from them.

Also, you can always edit your post with Grammarly(no subscription is needed), it corrects all the punctuation errors your eyes must have missed while typing.