Much better flow to this story. Some very good writing and an interesting storyline.
Keep going with the writing and you will improve every time. That's the joy of writing daily.
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Much better flow to this story. Some very good writing and an interesting storyline.
Keep going with the writing and you will improve every time. That's the joy of writing daily.
Dear Mr. @niallon11,
Thank you so much Sir for your invaluable feedback. Experienced Hiveians like you only can show inexperienced people like us a much better way. I am ever indebted to all of you for your continued support which I believe will last long forever and ever.