Participando en el Club de Poesía Freewite House "Dolor acogedor, felicidad esquiva" [Spa - Eng]

in Literatoslast year (edited)

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Este ocaso rosa
tiene un tinte extraño
ya no es el matiz
claro de tu risa colgada a palabras
casi sin sentido.

Ahora me abraza
y abraza tu ausencia
y aún no me acostumbro
a que ya no estás.

Dos tazas de té
llegan en mis manos
pero tu regreso
se diluye en el horizonte
se entremezcla en la distancia
pasa con el viento
y se lleva - junto a la esperanza - el calor de "la otra taza"

Aún sin aceptarlo
vivo este dolor
que comparto cada tarde
con el crepúsculo solitario.

Este ocaso rosa
tiene un tinte extraño




This pink sunset
it has a strange tint
it is no longer the nuance
clear of your laughter hanging on words
almost meaningless.

Now it hugs me
and it embraces your absence
and I still don't get used to it
because you are no longer here.

Two cups of tea
they arrive in my hands
but your return
fades into the horizon
blends into the distance
passes with the wind
and takes - along with hope - the heat of "the other cup"

Still not accepting it
I live this pain
that I share every afternoon
with the lonely twilight.

This pink sunset
it has a strange tint




Fotos propias, tomadas con celular Samsung J2 Prime /Own photo taken with Samsung J2 Prime cell phone



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Se refleja la nostalgia en cada verso. Saludos

Gracias por la visita, comentario y apoyo, @gpache

hola, está muy bonito su sentir ,entre la melancolía y soledad que a veces nos a ataca .

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Me gustó mucho tu poema, @sayury, de una expresión sobria y, a la vez, emotiva del dolor ante la ausencia.

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