first... the name of your book is cool.. so I'll read it soon.
second... comments... well... I'm commenting with lots of full stops.
I don't know if there's anything such as The writing style is hard to follow or They can't relate to the content. My aunt is a writer and my language (Bangla) is somewhat complex and on top of that she uses the words that are too hard to understand and sentence that would be tossed over your head like a freaking soft ball.
Don't feel bad just yet. You don't know what will happen tomorrow.
I don't feel bad and thank you. I'm just expressing some desire. I desire more people to read and react (positively) to my writing. But I'm totally ok if they don't. I'm enjoying the process so I'll keep doing it! Let me know if you read it! 😆