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RE: My pursuit of hoppy-ness didn't end (so) gracefully.

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Hahaha nice one there! 😂

I feel that my current writing style resembles storytelling, and while it's easy to comprehend and visually appealing, it might not effectively captivate readers or establish a strong personal connection. It could be a result of how I was taught to write in school, primarily focusing on formal essay writing. I've been actively working on altering my writing style to make it more engaging and relatable to the readers. Hopefully I get there soon! 😁

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Ahh got it! Well, honestly I'm working on the same thing! Since English is not my first language, I too was writing like just plainly put one thing after another. Hmm I guess how I've tried to make it more engaging is that I tried my best to put "me" in my writing. Like how I would tell this story to one of my friends and how expressive I was. I guess I kinda used that in to blogging.

Anyway, I already found your work amazing! And it's so good to see that you want to improve them even more. Can't wait to witness them. :))

Your command in the English language is already pretty impressive considering it isn't your first language! It seems that I struggle with making my writing feel casual. I often find myself reverting to a more formal style, resembling an essay I need to submit or a structured piece. Blogging is certainly a fresh experience for me! 😅

Anyway, I already found your work amazing!

This statement, coming from you feels really good, thank you and I appreciate that 😊