This is a powerful and thought provoking story,@macoolette.You've captured a poignant moment of social interaction,highlighting the complexities of poverty and the importance of selfreliance.The contrast between the hardworking vendor and the beggar is striking,and your internal struggle with empathy and frustration is relatable.The ending,with the photo,adds a layer of unexpected tension.From an article writing perspective,this could serve as a strong opening or case study for a piece exploring themes of poverty,self help,and social responsibility.The use of the Ilocano dialect adds an authentic touch,grounding the story in a specific cultural context.The question you pose at the end"what if she is not physically fit?"is a crucial one that opens up further discussion.Well done!
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Coming from a poor family, I am bit conscious of people who help themselves and those who do not. That is why scenes like this would usually catch my attention.