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RE: Make beng-beng chocolate ice

Hi @indahayuu

It would be great if in your next posts, you put more effort into presenting your drinks. Photos are very important, it is true, but it is also necessary that you tell us about the drink and not limit yourself to developing it in such a simple way, but rather talk for example about the ingredients, or how you learned it, etc. More text, more words.

Thanks and Cheers!

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hello team @amazingdrinks ...thank you for your input, it really helps me to develop much better writing in the future...in the next post I will try to make a blog that is much better than before ❤️