An epic foundation of a poem you wrote there. I don't know what was your age back then but the way you have mentioned it, the sound of the poem itself is super strong. One may delve into it thinking about butterflies but will surely come out with being wise. Thank you so much @whileatwiltshire for bringing up such an amazing poem among us all in HIVE, Colours.
With inspiration taken from Colours, I've written a piece. Wanted to praise and give the writer recognition. So, this is in recognition of Colours by @whileatwiltshire.
"Who did this?"
An anthem of the raised soul,
succumbs in the mist.
As far as I know
who did this!
Leant and unlearnt,
afraid of ashore,
it is he who denies,
that who did this.
Vivid of realizations,
vehemently abhors,
not a shame in eye,
but twitches the soul.
I know, I know
of who did this.
Shackles of thorns,
battalions afraid to die,
not a bullet escapes,
the bullied victims' eyes.
I know, I know
of who did this.
Amid the colorist
stands still many,
the prejudicial distinction
camouflages in any.
Will you still deny
of who did this?
Chuckles-buckles of sarcasm lasts
with victims compromised in a vast.
Rhythm-venom of everlasting ghast,
how shall I say it never lasts?
Will you still deny
of who did this?
Nothing to loath, nothing to steal from,
never-ending beings corrupt souls.
Determined to die, obvious in ties,
Courageous are the endeavors of virtuous souls.
Shall the time come from the divine,
that me and you are in line,
To share the gust of wind as a whole,
to praise the worthy allies.
Alit of fire may alarm, the pitied arms,
To this day may the raised, flight darns.
The End!
{Cover- Source}
Note. The italicized form is an inspiration from @chrysanthemum.
Holyyyy shittt!!
Man I don't even know what to sayy!! To even think that something written by little ol' me could even inspire such a beautiful strong piece!! Sixteen year old me would've fainted in joy if she saw this!
Thank you, dearest! This has made me very very happy!
A very very strong poem. The denial of the abuser after painting the victim in colours of misery and pain.. That's what I got out from it. This is what happens in this society every single day. And you bought it out magnificently.
Ah, mine is nothing in comparison to yours and I don't even intend to stand there, honestly. I really loved the way the 16-year-old you depicted and I just had this rush of emotions following through my body that I thought to write this down instantly. It is interesting how your young self was so aware and so known. MaaShaaAllah.
It is always the case that revolves around our society. But, I guess the time has come, when such kinds need to stop. Thank you so much for inspiring me, I am in debt. 😌😌😌
Amazing!!
It been awesome to know that something from my composition inspired you there.
Thanks for the mention and keep up the good work..
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