From the Begining Of the story, I was hooked and caught with the suspense you creatively inserted there in. As I continued reading, the mystery deepens and I had to read till the end with keen attention. only few writers have the ability to get my attention so much, given that I am not a heavy reader of literal works but when I find what I like, I don't let go! Apart from the Importance of mental health which is the meaning I read into this article, It is a great literary work and I commend the effort you must have put in creating it!
great work @mipiano !! please write more!
I like suspense stories to read so I guess that it is what I would write regularly if I would be a writer. {but I am not hehehe) I am really glad you liked reading it with attention and thank you so much for your encouraging comment, @magicfingerz. About writing more, there are so many great writers here around so I feel I should learn a lot first... but I enjoyed a lot working on this post 😇