New song, need some feedback!

in Music3 years ago

Yeah guys, it’s another single! I would love to get some feedback on my music ❤️

Lyrics-

I’ve been dreaming of a place called heaven where she is god and I am nothing. I’m a sinner and I am human. I am conscious, I’m in hell.

Wrapped in darkness conscious fading. Words elusive separated. Drowned in burden my creation. My fruition, my own hell. I’m in hell.