Most D&B mixers start off with music that lacks a clear melody. It's all about the rhythms and "oopmh" you mentioned, so there's not a lot of room for a story to build in the listener's mind.
As a musician, myself, I like that you've got a clear concept what this song is about, and—while simple—there's a melody I can hold onto. This is the kind of music that lends itself to an inner dialogue or story.
Looking forward to exploring more of your music :)
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Thanks for the awesome comment and feedback! I'm happy you liked this one and my style is simple but I find that works best for me to allow the story to unfold, that probably was influenced by my first love for trance music. I tend to hang out in the liquid dnb side, much more soulful :)