It's true what you say about the colour of the water, but that doesn't mean it's not a good photograph, just a different style.
I love the idea of the bubbles, especially the contrast between water, bubbles and fruit. The colour of the fruit gives it a great style.
I also like the contrast of the lemon with the dark background, very good choice.
I don't know if the movement issue can be solved, as the bubbles move... it's a question of taking a lot of pictures, I think, and see which one comes out better.
The issue of the colour in the water, I think the fruit should be almost nothing ripe, that would avoid the loss of liquids.
It reminded me of when I was learning drawing and painting, the teacher always had fruit, flowers and sculptures for us to draw and paint. With the fruits she would varnish them first... they would last longer... it's a trick.
Excellent, I love it, you are an excellent photographer, I'm a century away from that! I congratulate you!
I'm going to try a few different things. This time, probably due to the frozen fruit I used, things didn't come out that well but I picked up a few things I could do differently and will give it a try next time.
Persist and insist! I can't wait to see that new publication, it's going to be great!😀