Nice rendition but your lyrics took over 50% of your post, one or two stanzas plus chorus can serve. No need to copy and paste too much of the lyrics lines like the one you did here. The community gives more value to the explanation and inspiration behind every song so you should pay more attention to that. you should try to also source your lyrics by indicating with the site link from where you got the lyrics from.Hello @belight85
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Thank you I will observ that