Greetings, I am an unknown austrian hobbymusician, who recently released my second single. It is a song about traveling, but I sing in German dialect, so probably funny for you to listen to haha. Would love some Feedback. Lyrics in english translated below:
Gspiast as ned,
dassd wo anders bist.
Gspiast as ned, (Lange)
dassd wo anders bist.
Manchmoi,
is a zache Gschicht.
Manchmoi, (Lange)
is a zache Gschicht. (Emoll ausklingen lassen)
Und draußen in,
da weiten Wöd.
fühlst die ned alla.
Draußen in,
da weiten Wöd.
fühlst die ned alla. (runtergehn)
Merkst jetz dass du richtig liegst.
Richtig liegst
Du hast a Gfühl des ziagt di weit hinaus
du hoitst es gar ned aus
gar ned aus
Draußen in,
da weiten Wöd.
fühlst die ned alla.
Und draußen in, (hoch)
da weiten Wöd.
fühlst die ned alla.
Dont you feel it?
That you are somewhere else
Dont you feel it?
That you are somewhere else
Sometimes
it´s a tough story
Sometimes
it´s a tough story
But outside in
the wide world
you don’t feel so alone
Outside in
the wide world
you don’t feel so alone
Do you realize now
That you are on the right point
You got a feeling that drags you out,
you cant stand it anymore, anymore
Outside in
the wide world
you don’t feel so alone
But outside in
the wide world
you don’t feel so alone
Uhhhhhh
Uhhhhhh
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WOOHOO... Just your 2nd production? This one sounds quite professional!
Interesting to hear the German dialect, a dialect I don't master and seems to be quite far of from höch Deutsch :) Thanks to the English translation I could still understand what you sing about :)
I do wonder though: When one feels alone 'inside' wouldn't the same feeling apply when travelling? Travelling may give the feeling it fills a void, but in reality, I wonder if that is really the case.
ps Are you familiar with our own HIVE based video platform 3Speak.co (@threespeak). I realise you use DTUbe and that one also connects with HIVE, but this platform is not HIVE only. Added to that, I noticed the 3Speak platform to be of high stability, and love what the team is working on, which includes a total decentralisation of the entire service, not only the storage but also the distribution of the video's itself.
EDIT: may I give you another little hint? Add the Spotify link into your post. This allows HIVE (and none-HIVE) users to quickly catch you on Spotify as well :)
artist page:
fernweh link:
hey edje, thanks a lot for your nice and informational feedback! :)
Yes, second production. Friend of mine is the technical genius, so the outcome was quite nice, even without many ressources :)
Well it always occured to me, that when I travel I got this feeling of "freedom", so even though I am often alone I dont feel alone. I guess it is because it´s the opposite of the everyday routine. So you are more "forced" the seize the moment while traveling. But yeah, the void can also occur there, met a handful of people who got lost in the wide world.
Thanks for the 3speak info. I am not too familier yet with Hive, only used steemit couple of times, gonna try out @threespeak :)
And ye, good idea dropping the links, thanks for that :)
Cheers and have a good week!
Agree, when travelling as in spending a vacation, short or longer, I do agree with you: "I guess it is because it´s the opposite of the everyday routine." But think of this: When travelling 365 days/year, year on year. What will happen then?
The crux is to try and fill the void in life by addressing that void and not to run away from it :) Not saying you are running away from it 😉
Hope you'll have a great time in our HIVE community! 🎶🙃
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