Hello @beulah4real,
great writeup, quite educative i believe what you are lacking in making it even better is better imagery, take your time to get images that support or suit the post and do well to incorporate references. In addition, we would love to know where you source your info from, share your references so we may also do further reading to learn more about what you share with.
Thanks for sharing and i wish you the best
Thank you for the corrections.
I'll do better.