You say most of the book was not good but the structure here is solid. Your fundamentals shine through as you guide the reader through this supernatural tale. It is evident that you're an avid writer/reader, as your sentence structure and pacing are both on point.
Thanks for sharing your excerpts with us. Hope we get to see more. Your writing is a delight. 🥂
Thank you! Your comment is a delight.
When I wrote these parts of the book originally, they just kind of poured out of me. There were things I wanted to say, and a vampire was a good vehicle. He just didn't take me very far.
Thank you very much for offering a flexible place where writers can post their writings.
Your comment made my day :)