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This was great! 😁
MPD is one of my favorite hooks to read about, and I think you did an exceptional job here. 👏 I've yet to write a story like this, but this def gives me some inspiration. 😁 (that's honestly the biggest compliment I could give you). Also, I love that the main character's name is Little Voice. So poignant. 👌
Your writing is most def that of middle-grade books. You should definitely look into publishing some (they sell like hotcakes sometimes 😅). Anyway, I tried to look for stuff to critique, but I feel I need to read more of your writing before I can do it justice. So you'll survive... this time. 😈
Can't wait for part 2! 🍻
Glad I survived. Hahaha! 🤣
I will take on what you have said, though, and perhaps by writing here in S&S, I'll get to the stage of writing some middle-grade books worthy of publishing. ✒️
Thanks for everything. I look forward to reading your first MPD story. 🤗