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RE: Jessica sure didn't want him anymore.

This is a wonderful short story. It captures the pain of separation and shock in that electric moment where they meet each others gaze! I wonder what might happen next?

I would perhaps start off a little differently- Maybe just start with

She promised herself that she wouldn't give in to that desire anymore.

Opens things up dramatically from the very beginning! Regardless well done!

!PIZZA

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I really liked your idea. Thank you very much for your comment.