I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Jenny and Joey both come to life and set up well for a next installment. Poor Jenny though! Great drama to start something like this off and get us invested in the characters.
I'm really pleased you are posting this in Scholar and Scribe! Excited to keep on reading.
!PIZZA
Thank you! 😃 Hopefully the two characters continue to be as proper, living characters. They originated from the Freewrite challenge where they were both one-dimensional people, but I'm hoping to fully flesh them out in this story.
I'm happy to be posting in this community -- it was here just when I needed it! I had been looking for a writing community, but other than the Freewriters the other main active one wanted more polished pieces. So I hoped to find another in the community list and there it was ~ Scholar and Scribe! 😁
As long as it is creative writing it will have a home in Scholar and Scribe! Freewrites, poetry, lyrics, short stories or longer serial pieces are all welcome and most definitely not need to be edited for perfection! Our Let's Write Together events definitely demonstrate that!
I hope we will continue to grow and find more authors contributing to make this community a place where our creativity can just run rampant without too many rules or limitations!
!PIZZA