"when a drunkard stoop up." I believe that should be "stood up," yes?
"Notice those Colossus on her hands," I believe that should be "calluses" yes?
I have come across a few of those con men in my time here.
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The storyline is excellent, it sucked me right in and kept me right there, I felt the dust on the ground and wooden steps into the meeting hall @killerwot!!!
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There are always a few mistakes that slip through, no matter how many times I read over it. Thanks for pointing them out I'll get on and edit it.
Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! The contest seems great and I'm glad I was able to think of and write something for it!
!PIZZA