Even though this is only a first draft, you definitely have a good sense of sentence structure and pacing! That's a tough thing to dial in—lots of reading and writing needed to find it.
This is an awesome contribution to Scholar and Scribe, and I'm looking forward to seeing the daily output!
!PIZZA
Thank you! 🙂 I've been writing for a long time, but I had a yearly break and feel a bit rusty now. Good to know that it still reads well! 😊
Hopefully you like the following installments! About to start writing up today's one! 😁