How hurtful when who we hold dear cannot hear or see us despite our longing.
You've masterfully crafted this piece
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How hurtful when who we hold dear cannot hear or see us despite our longing.
You've masterfully crafted this piece
Someone pointed out to me that my character is too anonymous and that in order for the reader to connect with the character - I need to pull back a bit of the curtain behind which he is hiding, that I should show his emotionality or maybe a bits from his past. I am glad it worked!
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