Deraaa, I have to say, Bingo! I'm ever so lucky to have found you on my card this week. I absolutely love this story.
What an impressive entrance, Violet made onto the stage. Click-clacking heels and a sword unsheathed, trailing in her wake. Impressive!
Hehe. I'm still building my vocabulary and you just gave me what I was missing. Like they say in my country Na gode sosei which means Thank you very much!!
Your vocabulary in this story - both parts that I've read so far - is spot on. You have a delightful way with words and build up your characters with such attention to detail, that I have no trouble in imagining them in full colour! 🤗