Hello @gracepro. What an intense mystery. Especially where children are involved. I would not have guessed the direction of the story involved a former agent disguised as a neighborhood mechanic. Nice cover.
The development of your story from first meeting to getting the children to trust him is delightful. That's the one thing individuals in that type of business can't afford, i.e. to exposure family members or loved one that get caught up in the intrigue.
The plot is good, and the action moves along smoothly I feel. What a twist at the end ten years later. I supposed that Robert told the children about his past life.
Nicely done. I enjoyed the read and was caught up watching the mystery unfold. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Take care.
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