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RE: The MPS: Jingle Bells, Monsters Smell (Part 3)

Delightful and intriguing! I like that David goes all out for his friend Logan and his relationship with Marina gets better. A promise to get back the Toymaker's soul? Now, that's bold! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Beautifully written as always.

I love the direction you're taking this serial! Logan and Marina's POV would be a good addition. Regarding David's ability to defeat Krampus, he's human so that may seem impossible but with the help of Logan and Marina, then it could be believable. Well done! 🙂
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