This is gripping, @oluchi31! Paul's deception and betrayal are shocking but much more, the vengeance is chilling! The protagonist's transformation is fascinating—from a loving spouse to a calculating avenger. The ending is satisfying!
I admire how you narrate this tale. You slowly build the suspense with such intimate emotion, immersing us in your story. Well done! Thank you for participating in the Hunt Edition. Good luck!
!PIZZA 🙂
I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. The ending most especially. I really loved participating. Thank you so much for this beautiful comment