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RE: Revena

in Scholar and Scribe24 days ago

An enjoyable piece!

Every scene is packed with thrilling action, from the church to the street where the showdown takes place. I expected more from Gus though. Could it be that he had a soft spot for Revena? Or perhaps he was too confident in his fighting skill? Either way, this is a well-written story!

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Thank you. I feel Gus's ability was clouded by his jealousy and hate towards her. I'm glad you found the piece enjoyable.
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