What a captivating story! I enjoy your character development very much. We meet two friends —Jason, the curious researcher and Caleb, the skeptical and cool guy — and immediately love them because they are relatable. The pacing of their hunt for portal is exciting, almost as though the stars aligned in their favour and leading us (readers and characters) to a satisfying end. I'm glad their hunt was not in vain but how will they ever get out of Antarctica?! 😄
Beautifully written. You did a wonderful job of combining friendship, mystery, and humour into a thrilling fiction. Thank you for participating in the Hunt Edition of the Invitational. Good luck!
@stickupcurator 🙂
They might have to wait for a while, I guess. LOL.
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