This is another well-crafted piece of material that leaves us anticipating the following chapter.
I've noticed that you have a very delicate use of words, and these slight movements really instill a certain calmness in the reader. It's kind of like, well, if I were to put your writing into an image, I see it as someone gently balancing rocks to form a tower.
Keep up the good work. It has been about a week since I've written a piece of narrative fiction, but I think I'll get one up tomorrow.
Thank you for your kind words and delicate imagery describing my writing. I have posted my latest episode 7; it's always inspiring to engage with fellow writers!
I saw that eaelier, I'm going to read it in a few. I was in process of writing a story of my own to put up.
!PIZZA
Good luck with you. I will be your reader too =D