Greetings.
Here is the fourth installment in my
ongoing Haiku series.
Once more
without further ado...
Let us commence!
Spontaneous Haiku 4.1
"I embrace the light
however dark is the night
I see bright as day"
Spontaneous Haiku 4.2
"What I keep in sight
is my willingness to fight
holding all the way"
Spontaneous Haiku 4.3
"Image in my mind
the one thing I need to find
above and over"
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Thank you for reading, may you enjoy!
Haiku is my favorite form of poetry, bear in mind, it's the only form of poetry I enjoy reading. 😁 Whenever something is "easy to make" but "hard to execute" its on my 'likes' list fo sho fo sho.
Not sure if you've heard of Brandon Sanderson, but in his Stormlight Archive books he has invented a form of Haiku called 'Ketek'. Where, it's a Haiku, but it's symmetrical in its prose. Super interesting and complex stuff. Hard to do as well.
My point being, you can always do something to a format if you want. Regardless of its length. Never put yourself in a box.
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I was not aware of Brandon Sanderson, nor have I heard the term Ketek before. I am intrigued, you mean the poem is still a three liner, yet every line has the same number of syllables, right? I admit to being fond of complexity and I wonder which form can be perceived as more complex out of the two. Or are they but two facets of the same prism? Jack in the box can be a lot of fun if you get to come out when least predictable. Ha. Still, humor aside, I might look up further into Sanderson, I am, at the risk of repeating myself, quite intrigued. I appreciate that you took time to express more than formal politeness in your comment and brought something unexpected to the table. Thank you for this and for sharing the information on Ketek. Cheers
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