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RE: Tomorrow's Daughter - Part 6/6

in Scholar and Scribe9 months ago

Wow, this was an amazing read. I'm shocked that Ursula gave birth in the wrong hospital and then discovered there was another woman named Ursula White also having a baby there. What a wild coincidence 😂

I really enjoy how the story took the concept of time travel and linked the past, present, and future. It really gets you thinking about how our decisions can affect not only our own lives but also the lives of others. The ending, where Ursula chooses her daughter's name and moves to California, feels like a great way to conclude the story.

I'll definitely need to read the earlier parts of the story to understand everything fully. I'm excited to see what you'll create next.

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Thanks, and yes, if you read the earlier parts it might just let you get the twist in this chapter