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You got me good with that ending. I was going to point out that the perspective shifting for possibly confusing the reader but the way you did it here was phenomenal. It’s not actually a perspective change but instead the main character having a memory of these events.
Also, thanks for saving the time period and details of the characters for the end because I was intrigued the moment the technology came out and was imagining this to be a Warhammer 40k fanfiction or something. Ever read the short time travel story A Sound of Thunder by Ray Bradbury? Has a similar vibe and style to it (except Dinosaurs). 👏
Haven't read that story...
Lately due to dire academic circumstances, the only reading I've been doing are books that sounds like...
MEG 301; ENG 309; MEG 307, etc😂😂😂
I don’t miss those days 🥲
Good luck with university. What’s your major?