I find the latter part of your write-up so moving. You know, Cryptopians rebuilding the city even before its destruction is complete, everyone picking up his own bricks or whatever. I love your imagination. I hope you do this often, can imagine how captivating a longer piece would turn out.
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Thanks so much! The only thing more fun than writing the story is when someone reads it.
I think you are right though. Some longer more fleshed out writings would be fun to do.