Welcome sister! Your introduction was very well written and I was glad to find out that you are a follower of Christ!
One word of advice though: Try not to overuse the #introduceyourself tag. It should really only be used once. I noticed you had made the same introduction before in a different language. I would advise not to do any repeat-posts even if they are in different languages. Try to put both languages on the same post and re-organize your tags. This should help bring in more unique viewers to one post.
I upvoted this post since you seem to be still learning about Steemit and how it works, and I wish you greater success in your endeavors in life and online!
Sincerely,
interestinggirl