Hi! My suggesion is, try not to take up the whole area of the format with the elements of the composition, as you can see, the strokes of the word coffe - for example- are too thick, therefore the word turns difficult to be read. And sketch! Sketch a lot, until you finally get a better way to interact the speech of the sentence. I know, lettering is not an easy work but, nothing what really worthwile is. Keep forward! Practice makes perfect!